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Vampire Mistress
Joey W. Hill
Vampire Trinity
Joey W. Hill
The Submissive (The Submissive #1)
Tara Sue Me
Coming to Terms
Cara Bristol, Jade Cary, Alta Hensley, Celeste Jones, Sue Lyndon, Renee Rose, Anastasia Vitsky
Holding Back
Mila Kerr
Beautiful Disaster (Beautiful, #1)
Jamie McGuire
Epilogue: The Dark Duet (The Dark Duet, #2.5)
C.J. Roberts
In Flight (Up In The Air, #1)
R.K. Lilley
Undeniable (Undeniable, #1)
Madeline Sheehan
Entwined with You (Crossfire, #3)
Sylvia Day

The Haley Chronicles

The Haley Chronicles - Laylah Roberts Most of the ageplay stories I have read were nonconsensual stories about kidnap victims. The fact that this was entirely consensual made it so much better.I liked the way that she was allowed to break character whenever she felt the need without penalty. It kept the story from getting out of control a couple of times. The health subplot was a little odd because it went on so long - I was beginning to wonder if Jake actually knew what he was doing by the time it ended. And I liked that when they got really into things, they were both adults.The gated community aspect was fine for most of the book but really jumped the shark for me during the final segment - the daycare part was just silly.My only other complaint was the abrupt way each story ended. It really killed the overall flow. I would have preferred if some transitions had been edited in.